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 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A ) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

In recent years，many flowers shops have been appeared in our small

town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering,

visiting a sick friend,or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember

clear one day last year when Tom,a disabled student,presented some flowers

to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his

mother’s kind and care. With her，he would not have had the confidence or the

courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made，he

was finally admitted to a key university.

Answer 1

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in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering,visiting a sick friend,or attend a wedding 

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or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when

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mother’s kind and care. With her,he would not have had the

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confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result +of

the great effort he has made,he was finally admitted to a key 

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university.