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8．每年都有許多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行為引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)注．某英文報社正在舉行以"文明旅游"為主題的討論．假定你是李華，請你給報社寫一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客．要點如下：
（1）尊重習(xí)俗；  （2）不高聲喧嘩；   （3）其他
注意：（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好，不計入詞總數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
I've read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling．Every year，a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation．While they are enjoying themselves，some of them behave rudely，which causes a big concern．How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it is necessary to watch our manners．First，we must respect and follow local customs．Besides，we'd better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others．Also，be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．（高分句型二）More importantly，if we travel abroad，we should bear in mind that we are representing our country，so we need to be cautious about how we act．Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．（高分句型三）
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給報社寫一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）尊重習(xí)俗；  （2）不高聲喧嘩；   （3）其他   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：如非限制性定語從句which causes a big concern．主語從句How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．賓語從句be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．倒裝句Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．

解答 Dear Editor，
     I've read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling． Every year，a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation．While they are enjoying themselves，some of them behave rudely，which causes a big concern．How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it is necessary to watch our manners．First，we must respect and follow local customs．Besides，we'd better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others．Also，be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries．（高分句型二）More importantly，if we travel abroad，we should bear in mind that we are representing our country，so we need to be cautious about how we act．Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                             Yours．
                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．