Question

根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容， 寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于沙塵暴的文章。詞數(shù)：120個(gè)左右

沙塵暴的現(xiàn)象	席卷中國(guó)北方很多地區(qū)
沙塵暴出現(xiàn)的原因	砍樹(shù)挖草；過(guò)度放牧（over graze)
防止的方法	至少列舉三點(diǎn)

 

Answer 1

Nowadays, there are many environment problems such as air pollution, water pollution and sandstorms. The polluted air does harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What’s more. Many animals and plants are dying out as a result of all kinds of environment problems. People should be responsible for the problems because with the development of society., more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used, which has made or environment worse and worse.
As far as I’m concerned, to protect the environment, the government must take more effective measures, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection and those who destroy the environment should be severely punished. Only in this way can we have a good environment.

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于沙塵暴的文章，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，沙塵暴的現(xiàn)象，沙塵暴出現(xiàn)的原因，還有防止的方法，要考生自己列出兩點(diǎn)，審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的more cars and waste are produced and more natural resources are being used, which has made or environment worse and worse.和 Only in this way can we have a good environment.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來(lái)：象What’s more. As far as I’m concerned,等等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。