Question

【題目】現(xiàn)如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)已成為日常生活中必不可少的工具，它給我們帶來很大便利的同時(shí)，也有很多弊端。下面請(qǐng)你談一下自己的看法。內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1. 電腦不能代替老師上課。

2. 不在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以增強(qiáng)合作的能力。

3. 長時(shí)間看電腦的危害。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays the Internet has become part of our daily life. Some students even think that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers. I don’t agree with this opinion. In my view, we can’t have lessons without teachers teaching us face to face because they can help us whenever we meet with difficulties or questions. What’s more, it’s very important to work together as a class.

There are some other disadvantages besides these. Firstly, it will be harmful to our eyes if we look at a computer screen for a long time. Secondly, it takes us too much time to play computer games and we may get addicted to it. It would be very difficult to get rid of the bad habit. What’s worse, we may have access to the scenes of violence and sex.

In a word, if we use the Internet in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bringing trouble.

【解析】文章要求根據(jù)現(xiàn)如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)已成為日常生活中必不可少的工具，它給我們帶來很大便利的同時(shí)，也有很多弊端。談一下自己的看法。文章用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫，用第三人稱形式。主要分為三部分：先寫網(wǎng)絡(luò)的重要作用和自己的觀點(diǎn)：電腦不能代替老師上課，不在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以增強(qiáng)合作的能力；然后寫網(wǎng)絡(luò)的其他缺點(diǎn)，長時(shí)間看電腦的危害。最后寫我們要合理利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)，揚(yáng)長避短。

寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)全面，觀點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。還要注意語言的運(yùn)用，如賓語從句that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers. it takes us too much time to do sth.句型，詞語face to face, be harmful to, get addicted to, have access to等和連接詞In my view, What’s more, Firstly, Secondly, What’s worse, In a word等。