Question

8．此題要求改正所給短文中錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)"√"；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
    該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
    該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
    該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線．在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞．
    注意：原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改．
    In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history           66．have→be
of over eight hundred years．It lies in a valley with green hills         67．lies→lay
around it．It was such beautiful and famous that many                      68．such→so
tourists came to visit to it every day．They took                                69．去掉第二個(gè)to
photo； they wrote down their names on the walls；                         70．photo→photos
they brought foods，drinks and left rubbish everywhere．                 71．√
One day some tourists burnt a fire to cook food near the temple．      72．burnt→made/lit
All of a sudden，strong wind blew．The wooden temple                     73．strong 前加a
was caught fire．Soon the whole temple was burned out                     74．去掉第一個(gè)was
but only a few walls remained．The beautiful temple disappeared．    75．but→and．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：在我的故鄉(xiāng)，過(guò)去有一座寺廟．這座寺廟有著八百多年的歷史．過(guò)去每天有游客來(lái)參觀．他們拍照，在墻上寫(xiě)名詞，買(mǎi)食物等等．有一天，有些游客生火燒食物，突然一陣風(fēng)吹來(lái)，整個(gè)木寺廟著火了，很快寺廟燒掉了，只剩幾座墻．這個(gè)美麗的寺廟消失了．

解答 In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history  
                                              be
of over eight hundred years．It lies in a valley with green hills 
                                               lay
around it．It was  suchbeautiful and famous that many 
                            so
tourists came to visit to it every day．They took         
                                 去掉
photo； they wrote down their names on the walls；    
photos       
they brought foods，drinks and left rubbish everywhere． 
      
One day some tourists burnta fire to cook food near the temple． 
                                made/lit
All of a sudden，∧strong wind blew．The wooden temple    
                         a
was caught fire．Soon the whole temple was burned out          
 去掉  
butonly a few walls remained．The beautiful temple disappeared．  
and

66．have→be   考查there be 句型．     
67．lies→lay    考查時(shí)態(tài)．
68．such→so      考查副詞搭配．
69．去掉第二個(gè)to．考查介詞搭配．
70．photo→photos  考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．photo是可數(shù)名詞，拍照一般用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
71．√
72．burnt→made/lit  考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)搭配．light/make a fire生火的意思．
73．strong 前加a 考查冠詞．wind前面有形容詞修飾，所以需要用不定冠詞．
74．去掉第一個(gè)was       考查語(yǔ)態(tài)．catch fire不可于被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，所以去掉was．
75．but→and 考查連詞． 前后之間是順承關(guān)系，所以用and．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱(chēng)的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯(cuò)題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對(duì)短文有個(gè)了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類(lèi)選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語(yǔ)境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．