Question

據(jù)調(diào)查，現(xiàn)在不少中學(xué)生存在不吃早餐、睡眠不足和缺乏鍛煉等不良生活習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)你以Forming healthy habits為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶�。短文主要包括以下�?nèi)容：
1．簡(jiǎn)介不良生活習(xí)慣行為；
2．摒棄不良習(xí)慣，養(yǎng)成健康的習(xí)慣的重要性
3．如何養(yǎng)成健康的習(xí)慣：
※吃健康早餐，多吃水果蔬菜；
※充足睡眠，早睡早起；
※經(jīng)常鍛煉。
注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3．詞數(shù)：100左右；
4．參考詞匯：維生素vitamin。
Forming healthy habits
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habits，which do great harm to their health.                                       
                                                                    
                                                                    

Answer 1

 
Forming healthy habits
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habits, which do great harm to their health. For instance, they don’t have breakfast, stay up late and seldom take exercise. As we all know, health is more important than wealth. Without a healthy body, you cannot do anything even if you are a millionaire.
In order to keep fit, it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones. First of all, eating a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day. You should eat more fruit and vegetables, which are rich in vitamins. Secondly, get enough sleep. Early to bed and early to rise makes you feel great all day long. Lastly, take exercise every day to make your body strong.
As long as you form healthy habits and keep them, you'll have a strong body and live a healthy life.

 
試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文，文章的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生不需要去組織。只需要翻譯即可，關(guān)鍵在于使用合適的連接詞for instance, for one thing ,for another等。同時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)句型和高級(jí)短語(yǔ)，如倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等多種句式讓文章充滿變化，更有檔次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的寫作關(guān)鍵在于涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，不要有任何的遺漏和省略，在寫作的時(shí)候注意使用高級(jí)的詞組和句型，讓文章更有文采和檔次。