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17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
The"only child"policy has been changed in our country．It is possible that some of us may have a brother and sister．In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling，most of my classmate say yes．They are very glad to have a companion at home，with which they will no longer feel lonely．Beside，they can learn to offer help to others．However，the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them less whether they had a sibling．
 As for me，there be a younger brother and sister at home，I will be very happy．For one thing，a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful．For another，I will have an intimate friend to share my life．How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!

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分析 文章大意：在我們國家，計劃生育政策作了改變，現(xiàn)在我們中的一些人有可能有弟弟妹妹．在一個調(diào)查中，我們大多數(shù)的同學(xué)是接受弟弟妹妹的．他們非常高興能有一個同伴，有了伙伴，再也不會感到孤獨(dú)．另外，他們可以學(xué)會給其他人提供幫助．然而有些人拒絕，是害怕父母對他們的愛會少了．，

解答 The"only child"policy has been changed in our country．It is possible that some of us may have a brother and sister．In a survey about the acceptance of a sibling，

most of my classmate say yes．They are very glad to have a companion at home，withwhichthey will no longer feel lonely．Beside，they can learn to offer help to
                  classmates                                                                                             whom                                                 Besides
others．However，the few who say no is afraid that their parents would love them lesswhetherthey had a sibling．
                                                          are                                                                    if
As for me，there be a younger brother andsister at home，I will be very happy．For one thing，a little child is a great fun and I can play with him or her cheerful．
                          being                         or                                                                                                                                                                  cheerfully
For another，I will have an intimate friend to sharemy life∧．How nice it is to grow up with a sibling!
                                                                                    with
1．classmate-classmates．考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．在classmate前面有most of，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．which-whom．考查定語從句．定語從句中，現(xiàn)行詞是指人時，放在介詞后需要用whom．
3．Beside-Besides．考查副詞．本句中表示另外，需要用副詞而不是介詞．
4．is-are．考查主謂一致．本句中的主語是the few （classmates），所以謂語動詞應(yīng)該用are．
5．whether-if．考查條件狀語從句．本句中表示如果有弟弟或妹妹，他們害怕父母給他們的愛就會少了．所以用if．whether是表示是否，一般引導(dǎo)名詞性從句或讓步狀語從句．
6．be-being．考查非謂語動詞．在本句中，主句是后面的"I will be very happy"，所以前面應(yīng)該用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)．所以用there being．
7．a(chǎn)nd-or．考查并列連詞．此處表示選擇而非并列．所以用or．
8．去掉great前面的a．考查冠詞．fun是不可數(shù)名詞，所以前面不需要用不定冠詞．
9．cheerful-cheerfully．考查副詞．此處修飾前面的動詞短語，所以應(yīng)該用副詞形式．
10．在life后面加with．考查動詞和介詞搭配．share sth with sb 是固定短語搭配．

點(diǎn)評 本篇短文改錯考查冠詞，動詞形式，名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，非謂語動詞，主謂一致等，平時注重多積累，答題時結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯．