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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

              　　 2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.

We hope to know much about you and let's keep in close touch．

 

【答案】

 

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward

                              Makes（本文的主要時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時）

at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I

To（固定詞組look forward to期待）                movies（several后面使用復(fù)數(shù)形式）

think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have

   去掉（球類運動前面不需要冠詞）    What（what對名詞或者名詞短語進行感嘆）

During the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me∧

                      Differently（用副詞修飾動詞）                to（固定詞組want sb to do sth）

 go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight

                                     Fall(與前面的be,后面的fight構(gòu)成并列關(guān)系，都使用動詞原形)

 with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a

 

 bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.                                                         

Kept（與bird構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，故使用過去分詞的形式）   去掉（后面本就是一個主句，so多余）

We hope to know much about you and let's keep in close touch．

More（根據(jù)句意想多了解你一些）

【解析】

試題分析：

考點：考查學(xué)生在上下文語境中對詞匯語法的掌握情況

點評：答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識。平時應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯

 

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