【題目】閱讀下面短文,然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

“He who bears the greatest hardship becomes the greatest man.” This idiom shows Chinese people’s traditional belief in the vital role that hardship plays in a person’s life as they grow up. But today, as our lives have greatly improved, do we still need this so-called “hardship education”?

“We definitely do.” said Wang Weiqiong, mother of a 15-year-old girl in Jiangxi. “Many children take everything for granted, as they’ve never known how difficult it is to make money.”

Wang is not alone. According to a recent survey of 2,017 people done by China Youth Daily, 81.8 percent of the interviewees supported hardship education including experiencing life in poor areas, outdoor training, taking part-time jobs, and doing housework.

Qiao Yu, from Tianjing Foreign Languages School, also supports the idea. “Hardship helps us grow and be prepared for the difficulties of society,” said the 18-year-old, who worked in a cake store this summer.

But while it contributes to students’ development, “hardship education shouldn’t be seen as simply making students suffer,” Sun Yunxiao, deputy director of the China Youth and Children Research Center told China Youth Daily. “It should follow teenagers’ growth” Sun said students could also do sports to learn to face difficulties, for doing sporting can greatly strengthen their bodies and minds.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120個詞發(fā)表你“對吃苦教育”的看法,內(nèi)容包括:

(1)你對“吃苦教育”概念的理解;

(2)支持或反對對青少年進(jìn)行“吃苦教育”,并給出2-3點(diǎn)理由。

【寫作要求】

1. 可以參考閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3. 不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語篇連貫

【答案】The Chinese have a traditional belief that hardships contribute to one’s growth. A recent survey shows that many parents and students support it, but some experts are opposed to it. (30 words)

As is known, hardship education refers to all kinds of activities including community services, social practice, volunteer work and various sports, which allow teenagers to experience the difficulties of life and society, thus contributing to their growth.

In my eyes, with the fast development of our living standards, hardship education has become a must for the contemporary youth. For one thing, via hardship education, teenagers can enhance their overall quality such as courage and perseverance, and get better prepared for the future. For another thing, by participating in various activities, teenagers can build up their strength and develop surviving skills besides written knowledge.

To sum up, society, school and families should attach great importance to hardship education for all students. (120 words)

【解析】試題分析本文是一篇材料性作文。根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容,要求寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。要求以約30個詞概括文章的主要內(nèi)容,并以約120個詞發(fā)表你“對吃苦教育”的看法。根據(jù)要求和所給要點(diǎn),文章可分四段來寫,第一段概括所給文章的主要內(nèi)容;第二段講述你對“吃苦教育”的理解;第三段給出自己支持或反對“吃苦教育”的理由,注意不要少于兩點(diǎn);第四段總結(jié)全文。寫作時要特別注意:1. 可以參考閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;2. 注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型,以提高文章的檔次;3. 注意使用一些連接詞,使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。4.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制,120單詞左右。

亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇材料性作文,內(nèi)容齊全概括性強(qiáng),符合題目要求,同時語句通順、精煉,使用高級句子。The Chinese have a traditional belief that hardships contribute to one’s growth.句中含有that的同位語從句;A recent survey shows that many parents and students support it, but---,賓語從句和but的結(jié)合十分巧妙;As is known, hardship education refers to all kinds of activities including community services, social practice, volunteer work and various sports, which allow teenagers to experience the difficulties of life and society, thus contributing to their growth.本句包含了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句,which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做自然的結(jié)果狀語,堪稱經(jīng)典搭配;另外In my eyes, For one thing, For another thing, by participating in---,To sum up,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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