Question

假定你是星光中學(xué)的高中畢業(yè)生李華，母校將為高一新生舉辦主題為“What to learn in senior high school?”的英語沙龍活動，特邀請你結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)勛约旱捏w會。請根據(jù)以下提綱準(zhǔn)備一份英語發(fā)言稿。

1．學(xué)會學(xué)習(xí)：方法、習(xí)慣等；

2．學(xué)會做人：真誠、友善等；

3．其他方面：考生自擬。

注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．發(fā)言稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

Good morning，everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school．

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you.

Li hua

 

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone!  It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently .Personally, I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates . It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here

Thank you

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見的短語achieve my academic goals實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)；Develop a good habit養(yǎng)成一種好習(xí)慣；get actively involved in涉及，卷入；No pains no gains沒有付出就沒有回報；It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.這個句子中it做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；Developing a good habit is also of importance.這個句子中動名詞做主語；It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.這個句子中it做形式主語，真正的主語是to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.，并且what引導(dǎo)的是review的賓語從句。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文