Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

短文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句話最多兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出增加的詞;

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉;

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,” Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】achieve改為achieving

【2】toughly改為tough

【3】Senior前加 a

【4】that改為what

【5】anxious改為anxiety

【6】去掉from

【7】Besides改為However

【8】has改為is

【9】challenged改為challenging

【10】said改為says

【解析】

【1】achieve改為achieving；固定用法：be on the way to doing。這里的to是介詞，后面應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞形式。故將achieve改為achieving。

【2】toughly改為tough；考查形容詞修飾系動(dòng)詞。is是系動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)該用形容詞來(lái)修飾，toughly是副詞。故將toughly改為tough。

【3】Senior前加 a；考查冠詞。student是可數(shù)名詞。故在Senior前加 a。

【4】把equip myself with 后的that改為what；考查賓語(yǔ)從句。with是介詞，后面應(yīng)該接賓語(yǔ)，that不能引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句。故把equip myself with 后的that改為what。

【5】anxious改為anxiety；這一句的主語(yǔ)是anxious and pressure，但是anxious是形容詞，不能做主語(yǔ)，故將anxious改為anxiety。

【6】去掉from；固定用法。discourage 是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接接名詞。故去掉from。

【7】Besides改為However；前一句句意;緊張和壓力有時(shí)候確實(shí)會(huì)讓我泄氣。后一句句意：在老師和同學(xué)的鼓勵(lì)下，我認(rèn)為我可以成功。兩句沒有明顯的并列關(guān)系，而是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系，故將Besides改為However。

【8】has改為is；固定句型：there be 句型。故將has改為is。

【9】challenged改為challenging；考查challenge的形容詞詞意。challenged受到挑戰(zhàn)的；challenging具有挑戰(zhàn)性的。而文中句意，根據(jù)上下文，應(yīng)該是無(wú)論它有多具有挑戰(zhàn)力…故將challenged改為challenging。

【10】said改為says；常規(guī)用法。名言、諺語(yǔ)、俗語(yǔ)等是客觀存在的，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)表達(dá)，故將said改為says。