Question

短文改錯（共10處，每處0.5分，滿分5分）

Maria,

Your problem is a common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. The important thing I must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly about them. Next, try talking with a classmate who share the same interest with you or who is shy as you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate, but you can also talk about your hobbies. When someone is in the trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. In this way, you can make as much friends as possible.

Yours,

Lily

Answer 1

1.advices改為advice

2.in改為of

3.I改為you

4.loud改為louder

5.about改為to/towards

6.share改為shares

7.shy前加as

8.but改為and

9.去掉the

10.much改為many

【解析】

試題分析：這是一封Lily寫給Maria的信。如何交朋友，Lily給Maria提出一些建議：相信自己，給朋友微笑；和興趣愛好以及性格一樣的同學交談；當別人處于困境中時要幫助他們。

1.advices改為advice 考查不可數(shù)名詞。advice 建議，忠告，是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復數(shù)形式。故把advices改為advice。

2.in改為of 考查固定短語。固定短語：first of all 首先。故把in改為of。

3.I改為you考查人稱代詞。The important thing I must do is to smile at your classmates.整篇文章都是給“you”提的建議，所以此處應是說你必須做的最重要的事情是對你的同學微笑。故把I改為you。

4.loud改為louder考查副詞比較級。One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.因為后面有表示比較的“than”，所以副詞loud應用比較級形式louder。故把loud改為louder。

5.about改為to/towards考查介詞�！�…you are friendly about them.固定短語：be friendly to/towards sb對某人友好, to與towards都表示方向性的介詞。故把about改為to/towards。

6.share改為shares 考查動詞的數(shù)。try talking with a classmate who share the same interest with you …… who share the same interest with you是定語從句，修飾先行詞a classmate，一個同學，所以謂語動詞share應用三單形式shares。故把share改為shares。

7.shy前加as 考查固定短語�！�…who is shy as you.和你一樣害羞的同學。固定短語：as……as……和……一樣，中間用形容詞或副詞原級。故把shy前加as。

8.but改為and 考查固定短語。You can discuss your studies with a classmate, but you can also talk about your hobbies.前句說你可以和你的同學討論你的學習，后句說你也可以談論你的愛好，前后是意思的順承不是轉折，故把but改為and。

9.去掉the 考查固定短語。When someone is in the trouble, 固定短語：be in trouble處于困境中，trouble前不加冠詞，故去掉the。

10.much改為many 考查形容詞。you can make as much friends as possible. much形容詞，許多，加不可數(shù)名詞；many形容詞，許多，加可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)，friends是可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)，前面要用many修飾，故把much改為many。

考點：考查短文改錯