Question

在當(dāng)今社會(huì)上，有些人認(rèn)為：“九零后”的行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，闡述觀點(diǎn)，幫助人們消除憂慮。

人們對(duì)“九零后”的憂慮	1．白私； 2．依賴性強(qiáng)； 3．貪圖過(guò)舒適的生活等。
“九零后”的長(zhǎng)處	敢于挑戰(zhàn)……(請(qǐng)聯(lián)系白己擬定內(nèi)容,再列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。)

 
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右：
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
We, post 90's generation, are developing our unique values in special manners. It has raised people's some worry. __________________________________________   ___
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Answer 1

We, post 90’s generation, are developing our unique values in special manners. It has raised people’s some worry.
They are worried that we rely on our parents too much and tend to live a comfortable life. Besides, they think we are selfish and are unwilling to work with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success.
However, we have our own advantages. Firstly, we are independent in thinking and desire to learn more about the world around us. Secondly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks in our life, which helps to realize our dreams. What’s more, we are creative and can keep up with modern science and technology.
Please do trust us. We are a hopeful generation.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，話題是關(guān)于“九零后”的行為方式和價(jià)值觀，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。范文中的they think we are selfish and are unwilling to work with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success.就是使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，還需要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞講句子串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章通順，連貫。如范文的Besides, However, Firstly, Secondly, What’s more,等
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。