Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycle”的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1．目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2．騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。

參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy-saving）

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：120詞左右；

2．演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let's Ride Bicycles”.

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Thank you!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m convened, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一封主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycle”的演講稿，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意要適當(dāng)拓展，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。