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【題目】Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school , I was driving to my parents' home in Missouri for Christmas．I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款臺), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas．

I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car．I stopped and wondered what I should do．A car pulled up behind me．It was the couple. They said they would take me．We chatted and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card．I wrote them a thank-you note．Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them．Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful．

Years later, I drove to a meeting in the morning．In late afternoon I found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery was dead．Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership was right next door．I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom．

"Just how friendly is Friendly Ford?" I asked and explained my trouble．They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it．They would accept no payment, so later, I wrote them a note to say thanks．I received a letter back from one of the salesmen．No one had ever written him and say thank you, and it meant a lot, he said．

"Thank you" - two powerful words．They're easy to say and mean so much．

[寫作內容]

(1) 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

(2) 然后以120個詞就“向別人道謝的重要性”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法, 并包括如下要點：

a) 敘述你向別人道謝的一次真實或虛構的經歷；

b) 你是如何認識到向別人道謝的重要性的；

c) 向別人道謝對你和對方都帶了什么影響。

[寫作要求] 可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子

【評分標準】概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

In this passage , the writer mainly tells us two of his experiences of being helped by strangers. After he wrote them thank-you notes, he realized that saying”thank you” to others meant so much.

I have a similar experience. Once when I was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that I had to wait for the rain to stop. But after half an hour it was still raining. Seeing this, the guard at the gate offered to lend me his umbrella. I accepted at once. Thanks to his help, I got home on time without getting wet. The next morning, when I returned the umbrella to the guard, I said thank you to him and left him a note expressing my gratitude sincerely . To my surprise , he said no one had ever written him to say thank you . What’s more , some students who borrowed umbrella from him never returned it “What you did really means a lot to me “said he.

From then on, I realized the importance of saying thank you I never forgot to show my appreciation to anyone who helped me.

In my opinion , saying thank you to others is not only easy but also meaningful to the person who says it and the receiver!

【解析】

試題分析：[寫作內容](1) 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；(2) 然后以120個詞就“向別人道謝的重要性”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法, 并包括如下要點：a) 敘述你向別人道謝的一次真實或虛構的經歷；b) 你是如何認識到向別人道謝的重要性的；c) 向別人道謝對你和對方都帶了什么影響。[寫作要求] 可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內容, 但不得直接引用原文中的句子。要用通順的句子把所提示的點寫全，可根據(jù)內容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用簡單句。

【亮點說明】In this passage , the writer mainly tells us two of his experiences of being helped by strangers.句中使用了動名詞的被動式；After he wrote them thank-you notes, he realized that saying”thank you” to others meant so much.在此句中運用了時間狀語從句和賓語從句；Once when I was about to go home after school, it was raining so heavily that I had to wait for the rain to stop. when引導的時間狀語從句和so--- that引導的結果狀語從句巧妙地結合在一起；Seeing this, the guard at the gate offered to lend me his umbrella.句中運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語；From then on, I realized the importance of saying thank you I never forgot to show my appreciation to anyone who helped me.句中運用了賓語從句和who引導的定語從句；In my opinion , saying thank you to others is not only easy but also meaningful to the person who says it and the receiver!動名詞短語作主語并在句中使用了定語從句，這是文章的一大亮點。