Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨ ）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Matt was walking in the forest near his village while he smelled smoke and saw a fire that was out of the control. Many trees have already been burned. He looked at the black ground and saw a green snake, that was trapped under a large tree. He knew the snake was in danger. He lifted up the falling tree, put the snake into a bag and ran back to his village.

He showed his mother the beautiful snake and begged her to let him keeping it. He fed the snake on mice and gave them a huge area in their yard to live. The snake lived a very comfortably life. He also invited one of his best friend to feed it. Both of them liked the snake very much.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】while-→when

【2】去掉the

【3】have→had

【4】去掉that

【5】falling-→fallen

【6】keeping→keep

【7】them→it

【8】加in

【9】comfortably→comfortable

【10】friend→friends

【解析】

試題分析：Matt從深林大火中救出了一條蛇，并且收養(yǎng)了它，他和朋友都很喜歡這條蛇。

【1】while→when 考查連詞。While要連接兩個(gè)都是延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞句子，而when不用，所以用when。

【2】去掉the 考查冠詞。 Out of control失控，不用加介詞，所以去掉the。

【3】have→had 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。 全文使用過(guò)去時(shí)，故用had。

【4】去掉that考查連詞。saw a green snake was trapped under a large tree.是saw的從句，不是snake的從句，故去掉that

【5】falling→fallen考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)。是已經(jīng)倒塌的樹(shù)，用完成時(shí)，用fallen。

【6】keeping→keep 考查動(dòng)詞。Let sb do sth讓某人做某事，故用keep。

【7】them→it 考查代詞。It指代前文的snake是一條蛇，用it。

【8】加in 考查介詞。Live是不及物動(dòng)詞，后接介詞，所以加in。

【9】comfortably→comfortable 考查形容詞。修飾名詞life，用形容詞，用comfortable 。

【10】friend→friends考查名詞。根據(jù)one of可知后面用可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，用friends。