Question

The saying goes“Attitude is everything, details determine success or failure. ”請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)上述觀點(diǎn)的一些看法。　
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ);�、诔�詩(shī)歌外，文體不限;③詞數(shù)為120左右。
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                        
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Some people may think that one who wants to achieve great success shouldn’t pay much attention to details. But sometimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.
Since we have realized the importance of details, what should we do? First, we should form the habit of being careful, because a careful person will rarely overlook details. What’s more, we should learn to keep the balance of quantity and quality. We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make. Why? Because when we work at high speed, the only thing we care about is quantity in which case we are more likely to neglect the details.
As far as I’m concerned, we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.

試題分析：本文是開(kāi)放式作文，也是話題作文，要求考生根據(jù)英文提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例，根據(jù)所給的英語(yǔ)提示，寫一篇話題作文。這種“開(kāi)放式”的論述文的命題形式給考生很大的自由發(fā)揮空間，對(duì)寫作的布局謀篇提出了較高要求，要求考生既要會(huì)發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)識(shí)，又要會(huì)進(jìn)行描寫敘述。這種寫作命題有利于立體考查學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)、創(chuàng)新思維能力和價(jià)值觀，具有較強(qiáng)的選拔功能。在寫作中不要忘了用高級(jí)的詞匯和復(fù)雜的句型表達(dá)，主要是學(xué)過(guò)的知識(shí)適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用，也要注意句與句的關(guān)聯(lián)，使文章更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如But sometimes it is the details that determine our success, for they may be the very thing that has a great impact on what we’re doing.這句話有強(qiáng)調(diào)句，賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句，還有We may find that when faced with lots of work, the faster we do it, the more mistakes we will make.這句話運(yùn)用了狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和the more，the more這樣的句型，we should keep it in mind that quality comes first, without which quantity is of no significance.這里用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)，文章還注意了句子的銜接如：first，What’s more, As far as I’m concerned,等等。