Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共25分）（原創(chuàng)）
你朋友Joe寫(xiě)信告訴你他找工作又失敗了，他向你詢(xún)問(wèn)一些方法，請(qǐng)按照以下寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容和要求，以英語(yǔ)書(shū)信形式給予答復(fù)（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）。
1、正確面對(duì)目前形勢(shì)（全球金融危機(jī)、沖擊、競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手多而且強(qiáng)）；
2、傳播你在找工作的信息；
3、精心準(zhǔn)備好自己的工作簡(jiǎn)歷；
4、確信自己具備你求職工作所要求的能力；
5、準(zhǔn)備好每一次面試，留下好印象，展現(xiàn)自己的能力。
注意：信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已有，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：1、全球金融危機(jī)the global financial crisis
2、個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷resume
Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear you failed again in finding a job.                          
                                                                          
                                                                          
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

Answer 1

Dear Joe,
I’m very sorry to hear that you failed again in finding a job. Taking a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first. It’s true that it’s tough seeking for a job—especially if you’re competing with thousands of other hopeful students with the global financial crisis hitting the economy. Here are a few tips which might be of a little use.
Getting connected to your network and keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job are surely urgent matters. Meanwhile, it’s worth your time and money to present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully. When you apply for a job, be sure you match any skills required. What’s more, don’t forget to make good preparations for every interview, where and leaving a good impression can make all the differentce in getting the job.
Good luck!
Yours truly
Hanghang

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作首先表明讓他對(duì)現(xiàn)在的就業(yè)形式有一個(gè)正確的態(tài)度a right attitude towards the present situation is a must at first.然后分析工作難找的原因，是因?yàn)榻?jīng)融危機(jī)the global financial crisis hitting the economy.以及與很多優(yōu)秀的人才進(jìn)行競(jìng)爭(zhēng)competing with thousands of other hopeful students.然后提出自己的建議，傳播你在找工作的信息keeping everyone informed that you’re looking for a job、精心準(zhǔn)備好自己的工作簡(jiǎn)歷present yourself well by preparing your perfect resume carefully.確信自己具備你求職工作所要求的能力be sure you match any skills required.準(zhǔn)備好每一次面試，make good preparations for every interview留下好印象，展現(xiàn)自己的能力expressing your abilities well。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作的文章較開(kāi)放式的文體，比較好寫(xiě)。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，首先思路要清晰，要對(duì)所表達(dá)的句子通順的說(shuō)出來(lái)，遇到不會(huì)的要學(xué)會(huì)替換所用語(yǔ)，來(lái)達(dá)到同樣的意思。在每一篇作文中，對(duì)于表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用俗語(yǔ)，如when it comes to當(dāng)談到，運(yùn)用平時(shí)常用的句式來(lái)使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體。