Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增力口、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（A),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起），不計(jì)分。

When I am a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music". After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we both thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed, and he became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practise it every day.

Answer 1

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