Question

【題目】學(xué)生在考試中作弊現(xiàn)象時有發(fā)生。假定你是高一學(xué)生李英，請根據(jù)下列要點，給某英語報社投稿反映這種現(xiàn)象，并呼吁廣大學(xué)生停止作弊。

1.作弊的手段 2.作弊的危害 3.對作弊采取的措施

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

4. 參考詞匯：競爭competition 懲罰punishment

Dear Editor,

I am a Senior One student in a high school in Hubei. These days

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Yours

Li Ying

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I am a Senior One student in a high school in Hubei. These days there are always some students cheating in exams. Some of them look at each other’s papers, some refer to their textbooks or reference books, and still some just prepare pieces of paper on which are written some answers. Other students use mobile phones to get answers.

As a result, it leads to unfair competition and makes some students less confident of their studies. I think that measures must be taken to stop it. Firstly, a severe punishment should be used to prevent such a practice going on. Secondly, students should be made aware of the harm of cheating and the importance of being honest.

Finally, I hope the newspaper can do something to help students to stop cheating.

【解析】

試題分析：這是提綱類寫作，這種文章一般給出要點，要點有時比較詳細，也有時比較簡單，難度就相對大一些，不管是哪種情況，考生要注意不能逐字逐句的翻譯，而應(yīng)該注意遣詞造句，提高文章的語言層次，具體到本次寫作，本文的話題是抽煙的危害問題，文章的要點是以提綱的形式給出來的，不是很具體，內(nèi)容有：1.作弊的手段；2.作弊的危害；3.對作弊采取的措施。考生需要做的就是以提綱為中心，適當增加細節(jié)，考生要自己去發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容充實難度，這也增加了作文的難度，要求學(xué)生有很高的拓展能力，在確定寫作內(nèi)容后，考生要考慮的是選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。

【亮點說明】范文根據(jù)三個提綱的內(nèi)容展開，內(nèi)容充實，其中也不乏好的短語和句子：refer to 參考，leads to導(dǎo)致，As a result因此, be confident of 自信，on which 引導(dǎo)的定語從句， 還有范文還使用了Firstly, Secondly, Finally這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。