Question

【題目】假定你是李華，今年十月份即將去英國的布萊頓大學（Brighton University）留學。請給你在布萊頓的網(wǎng)友Tora寫一封英文電子郵件，讓他介紹一下布萊頓這座城市，告知他你的租房需求并請他幫忙租房子。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dera Tom

I’m writing to tell you that we’ll meet each other soon because I’ll start my study in Brighton University this October.

To make my stay ther more comfortable,I wonder if you could do me a favor.First, I need to have a clear idea of the city of Brighton in advance,so would you please give me a brief introduction to it?Second,I want to live off campus while studying there.Therefore,could you please help me rent a one-bedroom apartment with a kitchen and a bathroom?

Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，文章要點已經(jīng)給出，在寫這篇文章時要注意以下幾點：

1.整篇文章時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

2.要點要齊全，但是不要進行簡單的羅列，可以采用適當?shù)倪B接詞，或者是表遞進關系的副詞如What’s worse、In view of the above、First of all、Besides，使上下文銜接自然，行文自然流暢。

3 .要列舉一下例子，最好用簡單句與復合句結合的方法寫作如we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to disease。

4.多采用一些高級句型，如we’d better wear masks when we go outside，It’s one of the most dangerous weather conditions，同時使用一些詞組如due to ， result from，get enough，build up等。

【范文亮點】

提綱性文章難點：擴充成句，因為提綱性文章主題內容已經(jīng)基本列出，在將短句擴充時，要精煉。其中要注意盡量用高級詞匯和復雜句是來表達，如強調句，定語從句等，就如文中I’m writing to tell you that we’ll meet each other soon。再者就是要多使用一些高級詞匯與詞組，如文中l(wèi)ooking forward to，have a clear idea of，live off 以及help ...with...等。最后就是要段落清新，層次分明。就像文中要多使用一些連接詞語如First、Second以及Therefore等，使銜接自然。