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5．現(xiàn)在假設(shè)你是高一學(xué)生Tom，你班在舉行一場主題為"什么是幸福？"的討論．請你根據(jù)下列信息，給校報寫一封120詞左右的英文信，介紹討論的情況．
1.45%學(xué)生認(rèn)為：①幸福就是住大房，生活在大城市 ②身體健康，生活無壓力自由自在 ③工作、生活得過且過，不必吃苦
2.55%學(xué)生認(rèn)為：①幸福就是拼搏取得成功 ②保持自信樂觀，迎接各種挑戰(zhàn) ③愛家人愛朋友，奉獻(xiàn)社會
3．你的看法：（至少兩點）
Dear editor，
I'm writing to tell you about
                                                                                 
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 此書面表達(dá)是一篇話題類英文信，要注意書信的格式．假如你是李華，近日，你班正在開展一場主題為"幸福是什么？"的討論．請你根據(jù)下列信息，給校報寫一封120詞左右的英文信，介紹討論的情況．按要求把所提示的點寫全．寫作時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在120詞左右，不要太多或太少．寫作時避免只用簡單句，要合理的運用并列句，甚至復(fù)合句．
【亮點說明】I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about what happiness is．此句含有一個定語從句和一個介詞的賓語從句；Forty five percent of the students hold the opinion that people are happy when they enjoy their life by living in a spacious house in big cities．在這句中運用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句；Living a comfortable life and free to do what they like is important to them．此句運用動名詞短語作主語，且含有一個what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；The rest of the students think happiness is hard work，through which people achieved great success．through which在此句中引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；In my opinion，happiness depends on what we think about life．depends on后面跟了一個what引導(dǎo)的介詞賓語從句；另外，文中還運用了Besides，In their opinion，in good spirits，consider living a comfortable life等高級詞匯和短語，為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear editor，
        I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about what happiness is．Happiness means different things to different people．
         Forty five percent of the students hold the opinion that people are happy when they enjoy their life by living in a spacious house in big cities．（高分句型一）They hope to enjoy good health and feeling free themselves from stress and pressure．Living a comfortable life and free to do what they like is important to them．Besides，they don't want to suffer a lot from working very hard．The rest of the students think happiness is hard work，through which people achieved great success．（高分句型二）In their opinion，people should be confident，in good spirits and ready to meet all kinds of challenges．
        What's more，people should love their family and friends and make contributions to society．We should first work hard and be successful，and then we can consider living a comfortable life．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Tom

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．