Question

 假設(shè)你是李曉平，是“江蘇中學(xué)”的學(xué)生。請你圍繞“建設(shè)和諧社會’’的主題，根據(jù)下面

所給出的要點提示，用英語給全省中學(xué)生寫一封倡議書。

    要點提示：*1．人與社會：祖國、家鄉(xiāng)、學(xué)校，熱愛關(guān)心

              *2．人與人：家人、師長、同學(xué)，誠信互助

              *3．人與自然：能源、環(huán)境、動植物，愛惜保護

              *4．你的態(tài)度：(內(nèi)容由考生自己擬定)

    注意：*1．詞數(shù)：100左右。倡議書的開頭、結(jié)尾以及提示句已為你寫好，不計人詞數(shù)。

*2．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

                      A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu

Dear fellow students,

     Our government is aiming to build a "harmonious society" (和諧社會). I think it is everycitizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

     As high school students, what should we do?

     As for myself,

Dear fellow students, let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

Li Xiaoping

From Jiangsu High School

 

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【答案】

 

A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu

Dear fellow students,

     Our government is aiming to build a "harmonious society" (和諧社會). I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

As high school students, what should we do?

First of all, we should love our motherland, Let’s take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and activities.

Secondly, let’s fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.

Finally, let’s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

     As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above.

Dear fellow students, let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!

Li Xiaoping

From Jiangsu High School

【詳解】范文的成功之處：1、運用了文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、明朗，運用first of all, secondly, finally等連接詞；2、充分運用各種句型、詞匯表達(dá)，使文章不單調(diào)。3、自由發(fā)揮部分緊扣上文，不亂寫。

【備考指導(dǎo)】

    今年的江蘇卷書面表達(dá)出的相當(dāng)好，和社會熱點結(jié)合，又很好地考查了學(xué)生的英語水平，特別是自由寫作的水平。新課標(biāo)相當(dāng)注重學(xué)生的寫作能力，對于學(xué)生來說，應(yīng)當(dāng)盡量加大自己的詞匯量，并要關(guān)心身邊發(fā)生的事情，還要了解評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和應(yīng)試作文的技巧，同時也要熟背一些優(yōu)秀的文章或句子，爭取在高考中發(fā)揮出自己的水平。