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【題目】閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

I looked out at the smiling faces packed into the school hall. Flashes from cameras lit up in all directions. The applause filled my ears. I had done it. I had really done it.

Just a few months earlier, I would never have pictured myself acting in a play in front of two hundred people."Not for a million dollars," I would have said. But when the time came, I got up on stage and faced one of my greatest fears-and discovered I could do more than I ever gave myself credit for. I found a new person inside me, a much more daring, outgoing person who had been hidden all along, just waiting for the opportunity to appear.

If not for my teacher, Mrs Sather, I might never have found that opportunity.

In the first and second grade, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but it just wasn't in my personality to be very outgoing, even when I knew someone well. I was afraid I would do or say something wrong, so usually I just smiled and listened to other people's conversations. I did well in school and I loved to write. However, I would escape into my writing, where I could be myself and never had to worry about what other people thought of me. In my stories, I was never shy.

My teacher, Mrs Sather, always encouraged me to write more. She told our class to go after our dreams and dig in with both hands. I think she was one of the first people to see my inner strength. One day, she announced that our class was going to perform a play she had written." I'll begin to cast everyone tomorrow," she said." I need someone who is not afraid to be on stage in front of a lot of people to play the lead part of Dorothy. Anybody want to try?" A few excited hands shot up-mine, of course, was not one of them-and Mrs Sather smiled." We'll talk more about it tomorrow," she said. Then the bell rang and my classmates slowly left the classroom.

Paragraph 1:

When I was loading up my backpack, Mrs Sather asked me to go to her.

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Paragraph 2:

Hearing Mrs Sather's words,I realized it was time to make a change.

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Answer 1

【答案】When I was loading up my backpack, Mrs. Sather asked me to go to her. Mrs. Sather stared into my eyes as if seeing my inner self locked away inside. 'I would love you to give this a try for me. But if you really don't want to, I won’t make you. It is your choice. ' Mrs. Sather wanted me in this role. She shocked me, for I was always a shy person, not even dare to speak loud in public.

Hearing Mrs Sather's words, I realized it was time to make a change. I decided to throw off my shy cloak. I wanted to prove that I also could do something good in public. After seconds of hesitation, I nodded my head, confidently saying 'Mrs Sather I want to, no, I am determined to paly the role. And I will try my best to perform it well.' Looking at me with a big smile on face, Mrs Sather said 'I believe in you. If you met some problem, you can turn to me.' 'Thank you! ' I left her office happily.

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。文章主要講述了作者是一個(gè)很害羞的人，從來沒有想過自己會(huì)在兩百人面前表演�？梢砸惶焖_瑟老師卻讓她去表演主角，她很害怕，但最后說服自己同意參加演出。經(jīng)過自己的努力，她終于成功地進(jìn)行了表演。

續(xù)寫分為兩段，第一段的開頭是：當(dāng)我背上書包時(shí)，薩瑟老師讓我去她辦公室……，所以可以接著寫：薩瑟老師看著我的眼睛，好像看到了我被鎖在里面的內(nèi)心�！拔蚁胱屇銥槲胰ピ囈辉�，但如果你真的不想去，我也不想強(qiáng)迫你。這是你自己的選擇�！彼_瑟老師想讓我去演這個(gè)角色，這讓我很震驚，因?yàn)槲乙恢倍际且粋�(gè)害羞的人，甚至不敢在公開場(chǎng)合大聲說話。

第二段的開頭是：聽了薩瑟老師的話，我意識(shí)到是時(shí)候做出改變了。我決定脫掉害羞的斗篷。我想證明我也可以在公開場(chǎng)合把事情做好。猶豫片刻后，我點(diǎn)了頭，自信地說：“薩瑟老師，我想，不，我決定扮演這個(gè)角色，并且我會(huì)盡全力把它表演好�！泵鎺�微笑地看著我，薩瑟老師說：“我相信你，如果有什么問題，你盡管來找我�！薄爸x謝你！”我開心地離開了她的辦公室。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，續(xù)寫內(nèi)容要符合人物特點(diǎn)和邏輯。