智能手機（smart-phone）的使用現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)非常普遍了，尤其是在年輕當中。它在給我們帶來方便的同時，也帶來了一些問題：

1、手機強大的儲存功能使得人們的記憶力越來越差；

2、網(wǎng)絡聊天、微信使得人與人之間缺乏面對面的交流，造成人際交往困難；

3、青少年沉迷于網(wǎng)絡游戲，導致睡眠質(zhì)量差，影響身體健康；

4、學生甚至做作業(yè)也依賴智能手機，不愿自己獨立思考。

5、你的觀點……

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.智能手機帶來的問題；

2.你的觀點。

【寫作要求】

只能用5個句子表達全部內(nèi)容。文章開頭已給出

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has brought us some problems. First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and WeChat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. Last but not least, some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. As a consequence, in my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.

【解析】

試題分析：試題分析：考生首先要仔細審題，要點是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的，做題時包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。

【亮點說明】范文使用一些多變的高級句式，如定語從句的使用First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse.和In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health..等；高級詞匯和短語的靈活運用，如Last but not least，As a consequence等

考點：考查提綱作文。

 

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