Question

假定你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學(xué)習(xí)英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。

 

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；文章開頭已寫出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：住宿accommodation

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend the summer school during the vacation.

I’ve seen your ad., and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be any host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early replay.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于圖表類作文，文章要寫的重點內(nèi)容反映在純英文的圖表中，這無疑增加了寫作的難度。但認(rèn)真審題之后，其實也不難看出其寫作要點包括：說明寫信的目的；詢問：開課時間和每周上課時間、班級大小、收費情況、住宿類型。此外要明確在寫作時要用第一人稱，基本時態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時為主。

【亮點說明】

范文要點全面，時態(tài)清晰，詞匯使用規(guī)范。尤其是在主體段落中的表達(dá)清晰自然，使用了First, Besides,來串聯(lián)句子，且在表述中注意了句式的變換，所詢問的內(nèi)容不一定都用問句來表述，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧速e語從句“I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ”使得文章簡潔而不簡單，是一篇考場佳作！