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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有十處語言錯誤， 每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除，或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在下面寫出該加的詞。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出改正后的詞。

注意： 每處錯誤及修改均僅限一次; 只允許修改10處，多者從第11處起不計分。

This afternoon I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can help others in return for. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】while → when

【2】greatly → great

【3】has → had

【4】walk → walking

【5】but → and

【6】result前加a

【7】bad → worse

【8】his → their

【9】return后去掉for

【10】to → with

【解析】

【1】while → when when既可以與延續(xù)性動詞連用也可以與非延續(xù)性動詞連用，而while只能與延續(xù)性動詞連用，故此處while改為when。

【2】greatly → great 形容詞修飾名詞，副詞修飾動詞，此處用形容詞修飾名詞，故greatly改為great。

【3】has → had 事情發(fā)生在過去的過去，句子用過去完成時，故has改為had。

【4】walk → walking have difficulty (in) doing sth 在做某事方面有困難，故walk改為walking。

【5】but → and 我沒有告訴別人，并且我甚至拒絕了我同學的幫助。表示順承關(guān)系，故but改為and。

【6】result前加a as a result意為“結(jié)果”，是固定短語，故result前加a。

【7】bad → worse 根據(jù)語境，應(yīng)該是情況變得更糟了，故bad改為worse。

【8】his → their 前文講到others 表示很多人，故此處應(yīng)該將his改為their。

【9】return后去掉for 將來的某一天，我們能夠作為回報也去幫助他們。in return作為回報，故return后去掉for。

【10】to → with get along with sb 與某人相處，故to改為with。

【名師點評】本題考查代詞，副詞，固定句型短語等，平時注重多積累，答題時結(jié)合句意和語法進行分析，答完后通讀，是否通順，符合邏輯。

【知識歸納】

介詞后面用動名詞做賓語He left home without telling his parents.他沒告訴他的父母就離開了家。

溫馨提示：be busy with sth.忙于某事/be busy doing sth.忙于做某事；spend---on sth. 在某事上花費---/spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花費---；have difficulty(trouble/problems) with sth.在某事上有困難/ have difficulty(trouble/problems) (in) doing sth.在做某事上有困難。