Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇100~120詞的短文。
要點(diǎn)：  1. 簡(jiǎn)要描寫(xiě)圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。   2. 說(shuō)明圖畫(huà)的含義。 3. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />
注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù)）
In the picture, we can see that _________________________________________
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Answer 1

In the picture, we can see that the girl’s parents and her grandmother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more ridiculous is that her mother even carries a first-aid kit for her.     
In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents should not help their children too much. They should let their children be more independent.      
Many parents share the opinion that they must get everything ready for their children so that their children could focus more on their study. They all fail to realize that with the help of this kind, children won’t be able to live their own life without their parents in the future.    
Love and attention are needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much, or you will spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life.

本文是一篇漫畫(huà)作文。漫畫(huà)作文寫(xiě)作主要通過(guò)三步完成：
第一步：認(rèn)真觀察，正確敘述畫(huà)面內(nèi)容。
畫(huà)面的主體往往是人物。要仔細(xì)觀察畫(huà)面中人物的形體，相貌，表情，語(yǔ)言，動(dòng)作等，推測(cè)人物的思想面貌，尤其注意人物在干什么；還要觀察周?chē)�環(huán)境，弄清事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)以及和事件有關(guān)的情況，然后把這些信息連貫性地表達(dá)出來(lái)，使靜止的畫(huà)面“活動(dòng)化”。平面的事物“立體化”。通常以記敘為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)或一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，第三人稱。
第二步：選點(diǎn)立意。
通過(guò)收集畫(huà)面所提供的內(nèi)容，去粗取精，揣摩畫(huà)意，揭示實(shí)質(zhì)，得出結(jié)論。
第三步：引發(fā)評(píng)論。
與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活聯(lián)系，由此及彼地加以聯(lián)想與引申，在畫(huà)面意義的基礎(chǔ)上聯(lián)想到另一層新
內(nèi)容，發(fā)表自己的看法，可以提出一些建議和辦法。
第二和第三步?jīng)]有明顯界線�？梢砸粴夂浅�，以議論為主。
常用句型;
1.開(kāi)頭：This is a picture about…/ In the picture we can see…/ From the picture it can be seen that…/ Let’s look at the picture…
2.結(jié)尾段：It is not right that…/ If they do like that…/ We can draw a conclusion that…/ The story tells us that …/ It teaches us a lesson…
3.承接詞匯及句型：in my opinion / in our daily life / nowadays / As the proverb says …/ I’m sure… / meanwhile / however / at the same time / but / so / as a result / Do you think so?...
4.另外，漫畫(huà)作文在揭示實(shí)質(zhì)后往往會(huì)有精彩的諺語(yǔ)，格言，成語(yǔ)等出現(xiàn)，給文章添彩不少。如：No pains, no gains. / All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy. / Dripping water wears through rock./ Constant effort brings success.（滴水能穿石，功到自然成）/Use “one stone” to kill “two birds”（一石擊雙鳥(niǎo)）