Question

每個人都行走在自己的路上, 有著不同的經(jīng)歷和收獲。請你以“On my way to…”為題寫一篇英語作文，向學校英語報投稿，要求包括以下內容：

1. 敘述在路上你的經(jīng)歷；

2. 談談你的收獲和感想。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于120個。

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。

Answer 1

On My Way to Learning Chinese Calligraphy

Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love. I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.

In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. However, things were quite opposite from their expectations. I not only got bored with hours of practice but also doubted about the use of it. Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness. It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.

Judging from my own experiences, I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did: do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.

【解析】

試題解析：此作文是描述自己在生活中的收獲和感想，注意作文要有自己的真情實感，有內容，有深度。結構要簡潔，語言上多使用高級表達，例如，一些高級句式、高級短語、高級詞匯可以增加作文的文采。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：用一般過去時.【亮點說明】文章第一段第一句Almost every child, during the process of learning a certain skill, will have to experience a process from resistance to love.幾乎每個孩子在學習一種確定的技能的過程中，將會經(jīng)歷從抵抗到熱按的過程。這個句子是若干個短句組成的，這樣讀起來會使得讀者不費力氣又有節(jié)奏感。第一段第二句I myself am the best illustration by changing from disliking practicing calligraphy to being devoted to it.由討厭書法練習到喜歡它的轉變，我自己就是最好的例子。其中myself是I的同謂語。第二段第一句使用了一個賓語從句。In my childhood, my parents sent me to learn Chinese calligraphy, believing that it could cultivate the mind and make me feel calm. 在我的童年里，我父母將我送去學書法，相信它可以開闊我的心讓我感到安寧。第四句也是一個賓語從句Nevertheless, later experience proved that practicing calligraphy is both necessary and beneficial. 然而，后來的經(jīng)歷證明，練習書法既是必要的又是有益的。第五句為時間狀語從句When I entered high school and buried myself in endless homework, writing calligraphy became a fantastic way for me to relax and get rid of academic tiredness.當我進入高中，將我自己埋進無邊無盡的家庭作業(yè)的時候，寫書法成為了我娛樂的一種奇妙的方式，幫助我擺脫學業(yè)上的壓力。writing calligraphy …是一現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語。第六句結合了強調句和賓語從句 It was at that time that I realized how important it is to master a certain skill as a leisure activity.就在那時，我意識到掌握了一種特定的技能作為娛樂活動是多么的重要。文章第三段開頭用了一個非謂語動詞做狀語Judging from my own experiences,從我自己的經(jīng)驗來評價。I want to say a few words to those children who have the same trouble as I once did:這是一個定語從句，who在句子中代指children。do not refuse to learn a skill when you are young and vital, as in the long run you will find it helpful in dismissing tiredness and negative thoughts.不要拒絕學習一門技能，當你年輕力壯的時候，因為長遠來看，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)它在解除疲勞和負面想法的時候是有幫助的。本文運用了大量從句，在句子結構上多使用了分詞結構來避免拗口的長句，在文章結構上使用了一些很到位的連詞如However、Nevertheless；還有一些短語not only…but also不僅…而且、both…and …和…；got bored with厭惡某事；get rid of 擺脫…；in the long run長期來看 �？偠�言之，這是一篇不錯的文章。

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