Question

15．結(jié)合下列三幅圖，以"Humans Are Cleverer"為題寫一篇關(guān)于機(jī)器人的短文，內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
1．機(jī)器人在生活中已經(jīng)在為人類提供服務(wù)．
2．機(jī)器人不會(huì)超過人類，因?yàn)闄C(jī)器人是由人類設(shè)計(jì)、制造和控制的．
3．通過描述圖中發(fā)生的事，說明上述事實(shí)．

注意：1．圖畫內(nèi)容只是短文的組成部分，不是全部，要通過聯(lián)想加以敘述；
2．詞數(shù)：120個(gè)左右參考詞匯：play cards打牌；program程序
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息結(jié)合下列三幅圖，以"Humans Are Cleverer"為題寫一篇關(guān)于機(jī)器人的短文，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：機(jī)器人在生活中已經(jīng)在為人類提供服務(wù)；機(jī)器人不會(huì)超過人類，因?yàn)闄C(jī)器人是由人類設(shè)計(jì)、制造和控制的；通過描述圖中發(fā)生的事，說明上述事實(shí)． 2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：With the development of modern science and technology隨著現(xiàn)代科學(xué)和技術(shù)的發(fā)展；play an important part in在…方面起重要作用；be used to do被用來做某事；
 With the development of modern science and technology，robots have been invented and have played an important part in modern society．（高分句型一）
In many fields robots can be used to do those hard，difficult and dangerous work instead of humans．（高分句型二）
After he changed the programs of the robot，he began to play cards with the robot again．（高分句型三）

解答 Humans Are Cleverer
      With the development of modern science and technology，robots have been invented and have played an important part in modern society．（高分句型一）Robots can do many k inds of work for human beings．In many fields robots can be used to do those hard，difficult and dangerous work instead of humans．（高分句型二）
      Are robots cleverer than humans？No，because they are designed，made and controlled by humans．Once，a man was playing cards with a robot．He was defeated in the first three runs．He was very angry and then he had an idea．After he changed the programs of the robot，he began to play cards with the robot again．（高分句型三）This time the robot was beaten．The man won by three points．From this story we can see that humans are cleverer than robots．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．