Question

4．假定你是李華，你的外教Ms Jenkins約你本周六上午教她制作中國結(jié)（Chinese knot），但你因故無法前往，你的朋友韓梅梅將代你去，請寫一封電子郵件給Ms Jenkins，說明相關(guān)情況．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Ms Jenkins，
I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）
The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）But don't worry，I've asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead．She is good at making Chinese knots．Then she will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning．
Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）Wish you a good time!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你的外教Ms Jenkins約你本周六上午教她制作中國結(jié)（Chinese knot），但你因故無法前往，你的朋友韓梅梅將代你去，請寫一封電子郵件給Ms Jenkins，說明相關(guān)情況，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：2、要在恰當(dāng)?shù)姆秶鷥?nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be able to能夠做某事；express my apology for表達歉意；be good at 擅長；
 I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）
    The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）
I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Ms Jenkins，
       I would like to express my apology for not being able to teach you to make Chinese knots this Saturday．（高分句型一）The reason is that I have got a cold，and the doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．（高分句型二）But don't worry，I've asked a friend of mine，Han Meimei，to go there instead．She is good at making Chinese knots．Then she will go to your apartment at 9：00 this Saturday morning．
       Please allow me to say sorry again．I have the confidence that you can learn how to make Chinese knots．（高分句型三）Wish you a good time!
                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．