Question

11．假定你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李津．你們學(xué)校和一所美國中學(xué)簽署了教師交流協(xié)議．在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學(xué)的Alice，不久前她返回美國任教．請你根據(jù)以下提示給Alice寫封電子郵件．
（1）對她表達感激之情；
（2）她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情；
（3）希望了解她的近況．
注意：
（1）短文詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
（3）郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實信息；
（4）開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Alice，
How time flies!
Dear Alice，
How time flies!It has been more than one month since you returned to America．【高分句型一】How are you doing these days？And we miss you badly．（希望了解她的近況，表示思念）
I can well remember your soft voice，fluent English，patient teaching style．So we all appreciate your great help with our Enslish learning and cultural understanding．All the students have benefited a lot from your class and have made rapid progress．（表達感激之情）
After you left China，I ran for the president of the Students'Union and won the election eventually．As for the class，we have held various reading activities recommended by you，which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English．【高分句型二】（她離開后自己及班里發(fā)生的事情）
I'mlooking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Jin
Yours，
Li Jin

Answer 1

分析 這是一封給外教的信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容包括：一希望了解她的近況，表示思念；二表達感激之情；三她離開后自己及班里發(fā)生的事情．
高分句型：
1．It has been more than one month since you returned to America句子里．It 指時間，since表示"自從"，引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，主句用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)；more than 表示"超過"．
你已經(jīng)回美國一個多月了．
2．As for the class，we have held various reading activities recommended by you，which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English．句子里As for 表示"關(guān)于"；recommended by you做various reading activities 的定語；which 引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句；aims to 表示"目的是"．
在班級里，為了拓寬我們的視野，提高我們的英語，我們已經(jīng)舉行了由你推薦的各種閱讀活動．

解答 Dear Alice，
    How time flies!It has been more than one month since you returned to America．【高分句型一】How are you doing these days？And we miss you badly．（希望了解她的近況，表示思念）
    I can well remember your soft voice，fluent English，patient teaching style．So we all appreciate your great help with our Enslish learning and cultural understanding．All the students have benefited a lot from your class and have made rapid progress．（表達感激之情）
    After you left China，I ran for the president of the Students'Union and won the election eventually．As for the class，we have held various reading activities recommended by you，which aims to widen our horizons and improve our English．【高分句型二】（她離開后自己及班里發(fā)生的事情）
    I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Jin

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文一般給出的要點比較多，這就要求考生在寫作文時不用遺漏任何的要點，無論是漢語還是英文，都要在作文了有所體現(xiàn)，它們是閱卷老師關(guān)注的重點．此外如果要求有自我發(fā)揮，那么也一定要寫出來．