【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last Sunday, I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order at a big crossing near our school. At 8:00 a.m., we arrived there, wore red vests with the word VOLUNTEER on the back. We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule. To our delighted, they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-biker. We also give out some hand-made brochures about traffic regulations, for that many people praised us. About 4 hours later, they said good-bye to the police and left. Tired as we were, we all felt an honor to do our parts.

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【解析】1. voluntary group在全文中是第一次出現(xiàn),不能用特指,而應用泛指。故將the改為a。

2. 此處wear的邏輯主語是we,兩者是主動關系,不是作謂語動詞,故把wore改為wearing。

3. help sb. do sth./help sb. with sth.“幫助某人做某事”,不存在help with sb. sth這一搭配,故將with去掉。

4. 法規(guī)肯定不可能就一個,故將rule改為rules。

5. to our delight意為“令我們高興的是……”,故將delighted改為delight。

6. 副詞修飾動詞,故將patient改為patiently。

7. 整篇文章所描述的事情發(fā)生在過去,所以動詞應用過去時態(tài),故將give改為gave。

8. 考查定語從句中介詞+which的用法,此處for是與后面praised相照應的,praise sb. for sth.,that引導定語從句前面不能有介詞,如果有介詞,指物,要用which,故改為which。

9. 全篇的人稱都是we(我們),應該是我們和警察道別,故將they改為we。

10. it在此處作形式賓語不可省略,真正的賓語是后面的不定式。故添加it。

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