【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Yesterday I paid a visit to the Hong’en Temple Park with my friends. The park was full of fresh and beauty flowers. When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around, something unpleasant catch my eye. A young couple on the grass was eating, talking and laughing loudly even if they were the only people in the world. What’s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish onto the grass, ignoring the sign “No littering” nearby. What a shame!

So behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Hong’en Temple Park do as the young couples did, the park will be severely polluting and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think both of us should mind our behavior in the public places. Only in this way can we live more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

【答案】

【1】beauty--beautiful

【2】catch--caught

【3】was--were

【4】even--as

【5】So--Such

【6】couples--couple

【7】polluting--polluted

【8】both--all

【9】去掉the

【10】live后加in

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】文中第二句�？疾樾稳菰~用法。根據(jù)flowers可知此處需要形容詞來修飾名詞flowers，故將名詞beauty改成形容詞beautiful，意為美麗的花朵。

【2】文中第三句。考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上文的When I was enjoying the wonderful scenery around可知時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，故把原句中一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)catch改成一般過去時(shí)caught。

【3】文中第四句�？疾橹髦^一致。本句主語為a young couple，雖然從意義上看是兩個(gè)人，但是從形式上看為單數(shù)，故把was改成were。

【4】文中第四句。考查連接詞。根據(jù)even if后面從句的內(nèi)容：他們是這個(gè)世界上唯一的人�？芍�，這是一個(gè)假想的情況，故不用even if表示即使，而用as if 表示仿佛。

【5】文中第七句�？疾閟o和such的區(qū)別。So一般用來修飾形容詞或副詞，表示如此…。而such用來修飾名詞，表示如此的、這樣的。根據(jù)句意：這樣的行為使我深思。此句應(yīng)用such，而非so。故把so改成such，注意首字母大寫。

【6】文中第八句。本句考查原詞重現(xiàn)。根據(jù)上文A young couple on the grass was eating可知，這篇文章只提到一對(duì)夫婦，故把couples改成couple。

【7】文中第八句�？疾楸粍�(dòng)語態(tài)。本句主語為park，park和pollute之間存在被動(dòng)關(guān)系，表示公園被污染。故把polluting改成polluted。

【8】文中第九句。考查代詞用法。Both用于兩者之間的都，而本句中的us表示所有人，并不是指只有兩個(gè)人。故用all，表三者及三者以上的都。

【9】文中第九句。考查冠詞用法。本句中的in the public places，places為復(fù)數(shù)形式，而且沒有特指，是泛指所有的公共場(chǎng)所，故不需要加冠詞。所以去掉the即可。

【10】文中第十句。考查介詞用法。Live是不及物動(dòng)詞，當(dāng)它后面接賓語surroundings時(shí)，需要加介詞in，表示居住在…之中。故加上in。

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