Question

根據(jù)提供的材料寫(xiě)一篇短文：
時(shí)間：2013年3月10日上午11時(shí)左右
地點(diǎn)：鄭州市89路公交車(chē)上
事件:一個(gè)60多歲的老頭上公交車(chē)后走到一位女孩旁邊站著，司機(jī)就在車(chē)內(nèi)播放了“為老人讓座”的提示音，幾站過(guò)后依然無(wú)人讓座。老人便對(duì)這名女孩說(shuō)“我這么大年紀(jì)，你就不給我讓個(gè)位？”。 女孩回答“我沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)啊”。兩人隨后發(fā)生口角，老人在快下車(chē)時(shí)將女孩打了一頓，揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)而去。
要求：1. 用三、四句話概括此事件；
2.你對(duì)此事的看法：
3. 120字左右
參考詞匯：道德譴責(zé)moral condemnation     法律責(zé)任legal responsibility 
美德virtue                     良知conscience

Answer 1

不唯一
As was reported, March 10, 2013 saw a quarrel breaking out between an old man over 60 and a girl on a bus in Zhengzhou city. The reason was that the girl failed to give seat to him even after being hinted. What’s worse, the old man beat the girl in the end.
The incident indicates that some people’s morals are, to some extent, declining rapidly currently. On the one hand, the girl might be condemned for her indifference to the old man. It’s great virtue in China for the young to give seat to those who need it badly, such as the senior citizens, the disabled. On the other hand, the old man should take legal responsibility for his rude behavior. After all those underprivileged, even if not helped, are supposed to show forgiveness and gratitude.
In short, it’s everyone’s duty to improve social moral level, which is essential to create a harmonious society.

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考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
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