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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請您修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語文錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜錢（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只充許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I have a classmate named Angel, who is a lovely and bright girl. She is popular from all the classmates. One day, news came as Angel had got blood cancer. It really shocked everybody. When I saw her in the hospital, I could not help cry. She was very thin and weak that it seemed only skin and bones were left. But her face was so pale, she gave us a big smile to comfort us. All the classmates and teachers began to raise money. Some called media for help. In the end, I succeeded in raising the money for the first operation. We will keep trying until Angel was cured. Many people offered as more help as they could even though they did not know Angel. I am really touched by this. There is love in everywhere as long as we seek for it.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】from—with

【2】as—that

【3】cry---crying

【4】very—so

【5】but---though/although

【6】media—the media

【7】I ---we

【8】was---is

【9】more---more

【10】in everywhere------ everywhere

【解析】

【1】from—with 考查介詞。Be popular with 受歡迎；

【2】as—that 考查同位語從句；news后面跟著同位從句，由that引導；

【3】cry---crying 考查固定句型。Could not help doing 禁不住做某事；

【4】very—so 考查固定句型。句意：她如此的瘦弱以致于看起來只剩下皮和骨頭；

【5】but---though/although 考查連詞。句意：雖然她的臉孔很蒼白，但她給我微笑以安慰；

【6】media—the media 考查冠詞。The 表示特指；

【7】I ---we 考查主語；句意：最后，我們成功為她的第一次手術籌集錢；

【8】was---is 考查動詞的時態(tài)。整體文章用一般現(xiàn)在時；

【9】more---much 考查形容詞。句意：許多不知名的人提供許多幫助；as …as表示同級比較，故不用比較級；

【10】in everywhere------ everywhere考查介詞。Everywhere是副詞，前面不用冠詞；