Question

【題目】假設你是晨光中學學生會主席李明。你校將于7月28日接待來自英國某中學的學生訪問團。你受學校委托，負責安排其在沈陽的一日活動。請根據以下提示，用英語給該團的領隊Smith 先生寫一封電子郵件，介紹活動計劃并簡要說明理由，最后征求對方意見。

上午與我校學生座談（話題如校園生活、文化差異等）；

中午與我校學生共同進餐（午餐包括餃子、面條等）；

下午與我校學生游覽故宮。

注意：1. 詞數不少于100；2. 可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫；

提示詞匯：故宮---Forbidden City

Dear Mr. Smith，

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am Li MIng, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. I am glad to hear that you and your School Delegation will visit our school and our city. I’ll be responsible for your one-day tour in Shenyang on behalf of our school. The following are our arrangements for you.

There will be a meeting to talk about our rich and colorful campus life, including sports and art, in the morning. After that, we will discuss the cultural differences between our two countries. I am sure we’ll learn a lot from each other. At noon, you’ll share lunch with the students in our school. You can enjoy the delicious Chinese dumplings and noodles. In the afternoon, we’ll go sightseeing the Forbidden Ciyt . I believe you will have a good time and be attracted by the beautiful scenery.

I wonder if you are satisfied with the schedule. If not, please e-mail me. We will make changes. Look forward to your early arrival.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。覆蓋所有知識要點；應用了較多語法結構和詞匯；語法結構和段落都很好，盡力使用復雜結構和高級詞匯；具備較強的語言運用能力；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊；完全達到了預期的寫作目的。

【亮點】文章用了書信應該用的格式，用了三段式的形式，分點寫出內容，把文章所需要的東西都一一寫出，短語等運用的非常好。雖然沒有用過多華麗的詞語，但是寫的很樸實，沒有過多的雕飾。運用了第一人稱，很好的寫出了文章的要點。運用了定語從句等多種從句，還用了很多復合句，條理清晰，很符合題意，詞數也正好在要求的區(qū)間內。