Question

短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
請(qǐng)修改下面的短文。短文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1，每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2，只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

Answer 1

【小題1】at 改成in
【小題2】scream 改成screamed
【小題3】could后面加 to
【小題4】So 改成But
【小題5】greater 改成great
【小題6】去掉with
【小題7】Beside, 改成Besides
【小題8】helping 改成help
【小題9】去掉a
【小題10】bright改成 Brightly

解析試題分析：
【小題1】考查詞組：in a bad mood情緒差，at 改成in
【小題2】和shouted and ran 并列，用過去式：scream 改成screamed
【小題3】考查不定式做目的狀語：to relieve my pressure為了緩解壓力。could后面加 to
【小題4】前面是我想緩解壓力，但是沒有用：So 改成But
【小題5】考查however+形容詞+主謂，however great無論多大
【小題6】face sth面對(duì)，去掉with
【小題7】Beside是在…旁邊，改成Besides除了
【小題8】be ready to do準(zhǔn)備做…,helping 改成help
【小題9】詞組：make progress取得進(jìn)步去掉a
【小題10】用副詞：Brightly修飾shining，bright改成 Brightly
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考查考生對(duì)全文的理解和在上下文中運(yùn)用語法的能力和上下文串聯(lián)的理解力。特別是名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，形容詞副詞的變化和固定搭配。