Question

【題目】When was the last time you had fun with your parents? Your parents are all busy during working days; during the weekends, you may want to hang out with them but they may have to work extra hours.

This is not uncommon. In China, both of the parents have their jobs. Most of theparents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. A recent survey done in the US found that more than half of American parents spend less than three hours having fun with their children each week.

As the Daily Mail noted: Families are spending little quality time creating bonds and precious memories together during the week because of the demands of modern life.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2. 簡要分析父母陪伴孩子的時間越來越少的原因；

3. 結合自己的經(jīng)歷，談談父母多陪伴孩子對其孩子的影響。

【寫作要求】

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, it is not uncommon that parents spend little time accompanying their children, which may result from the demands of modern life and some other reasons.（26

There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon. First, in contemporary society parents are facing more stress from living and work than before, so they have to spend most of their time making money. In addition, parents today are more easily distracted by various electronic products when keeping their children company.

Take my own experience for example. Once upon a time, I got into trouble in my studies. It was my parents’ company and comfort that had a great effect on my regaining self-confidence. Plain and peaceful as it was, this experience left an unforgettable impression on me, which is of great significance to my growth.（134）

【解析】考生首先要認真閱讀前面的英文提示和漢語提示，認真審題，確定文章的中心，用最簡練的語言概括文章的大意。然后再根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容發(fā)表自己的觀點。內(nèi)容包括：1. 簡要分析父母陪伴孩子的時間越來越少的原因；2. 結合自己的經(jīng)歷，談談父母多陪伴孩子對其孩子的影響。寫作時要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出來。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應用了一些較好的句子：it is not uncommon that…使用了主語從句；which may result from…和which is of great significance to my growth使用了定語從句；accounting for this phenomenon是現(xiàn)在分詞作定語；when keeping their children company使用了狀語從句的省略；It was my parents’ company and comfort that…使用了強調(diào)句型。文章還應用了較多的高級詞匯和短語：contemporary；distracted ；electronic products；Take my own experience for example；had a great effect on；unforgettable impression；of great significance等等。