Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I like travelling and my dream of paying a visit for Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. On October 1st, I went to Tian’anmen Square with my parents, there we watched a flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang a national anthem, to music, feel extremely excited. Then we went to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proudly. I thought the old saying that "He who do not reach the Great Wall is not a true man." Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.

Answer 1

【答案】1.for--to

2.come--came

3.there--where

4.a--the

5.feel--feeling

6.attraction--attractions

7.proudly--proud

8.thought后加of

9.do--does

10.去掉but

【解析】本文介紹了作者去北京旅游，去各個(gè)風(fēng)景名勝參觀的情景。

考查固定用法。Pay a visit to參觀，是固定用法，所以for—to。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時(shí)，所以come—came。

考查定語從句。where we watched a flag-raising ceremony. 是一個(gè)定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語，所以用關(guān)系副詞where，there--where。

考查冠詞。特指“國歌”，所以用定冠詞，a—the。

考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。feel與其邏輯主語I之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞，feel—feeling。

考查固定用法。tourist attractions旅游景點(diǎn)，是固定用法，所以attraction—attractions。

考查形容詞。感官動(dòng)詞feel之后，用形容詞作表語，proudly—proud。

考查固定短語。我想起了這句老話，不到長城非好漢。think of想起，是固定短語，thought后加of.

考查主謂一致。who does not reach the Great Wall是一個(gè)定語從句，修飾先行詞He，關(guān)于詞在從句中作主語，關(guān)系詞替代先行詞，先行詞是單數(shù)，所以do—does。

考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。Although 與but不能連用，所以去掉but。