Question

【題目】目前，學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象。某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。 請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇征文稿。

內(nèi)容要點如下：

主要原因：1．考試偏多，偏難；

2．不用功，懶惰；

3．取悅父母和老師。

個人看法：1．作弊不對，違反校規(guī)；

2．要誠實，努力學(xué)習(xí)；

3．寫出自己的其他看法。

注意：

1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)100左右。

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

Answer 1

【答案】

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but from time to time we have too many exams which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. Just for the reasons, when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In fact, it is wrong to cheat in examinationsbecause it breaks the rule of schools. Just imagine! If you were cheated by others , you would probably hate the behavior. As a saying goes, honesty is the best policy. So we students should be honest and try to get good grades by studying hard instead of cheating. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

【解析】

試題解析：將材料中給出信息全部包含進去，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性，盡量避免單詞拼寫、冠詞、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、大小寫、標(biāo)點符號錯誤、搭配錯誤，詞語錯誤（介詞、名詞、動詞、形容詞、副詞），時態(tài)、語態(tài)，主謂一致，非謂語動詞等錯誤。多使用高級詞匯、短語、句型表達。【亮點說明】寫明全文要點，行文連貫，用詞確切，表達清楚，語言無誤。第一段：描述現(xiàn)象，第二段：針對已有的現(xiàn)象擺出自己的基本觀點，并對此進行闡述，具體說明。語言表達上，“from time to time”、“As students”、“In fact”、“On the other hand”、“Just for the reasons”、“What’s more”等這樣的語句間的連接成分的有效的使用，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，連貫；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面，“As a saying goes, honesty is the best policy.”諺語的使用體現(xiàn)了語言積累的功底。較復(fù)雜句式常用固定句型“It is known to us all that……”、“In fact, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rule of schools.”本文中It 的句型比較多，還有定語從句：“we have too many exams which are too difficult for us.”的使用或較高詞匯，這要求寫作者具備較強的語言運用能力，考查了寫作者的語言積累功底。內(nèi)容上，對觀點進行闡述十分詳盡，通過“On the other hand”、“What’s more”的表達，是自己的觀點更有支撐力和說服力。