Question

英語課上,老師要求同桌同學(xué)相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下短文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Zhang Xiaowen, who is sixteen, a middle school student in Northern China. She

is one of the best student in her class and she was won an award for young scientists last year. When seating in the classroom she looks just like all her classmates and after class her life is obvious different. She was born without the ability to use her legs and she has no feeling below the waist. She had to use a wheelchair to get around and it often takes her a little long to do everyday things, such as getting out of bed, getting dressed and going to the school. So far she has created many programmes and one of which received an award at her province’s science fair.

 

Answer 1

1. A之前加is

2.student改為students

3.去掉won之前的was

4.seating改為seated

5.and改為but

6.obvious 改為obviously

7.had改為has

8.long改為longer

9.去掉the

10.which 改為them

【解析】

試題分析：

1.

2. of后接可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。

3.“她”和“贏得”之間是主動關(guān)系，故用主動語態(tài)，所以去掉won之前的was。

4. seated是固定用法，這里省略be seated 中的be。

5. 句意：坐在教室里時，她看起來和其他同學(xué)一樣，但是下課之后，她的生活明顯地不同。所以and改為but。

6.

7.

8. little修飾比較級 。

9. to school是固定用法，意思是去上學(xué)。

10.這里是and連接的并列句，而不是從句，所以which 改為them。

考點：考查短文改錯