Question

【題目】眾所周知，學生使用手機越來越普遍，但是學生使用手機的消極作用也日漸凸顯，請你根據(jù)所給信息，以“The negative(負面的) effects of using cell phones on students”為題目寫一篇英語短文：

內容要點：

1. 長時間使用手機危害身體健康，特別是視力（eyesight）

2. 依賴于手機、網(wǎng)絡，學生與親友很少面對面交流并且沒有時間進行體育鍛煉

3. 上課玩手機游戲，聊微信（Wechat), 看視頻(video)導致學生成績下降

4. 不僅家長老師應該限制學生在學校用手機而且學生在學校也不應該玩手機。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右； 2 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文更連貫

As we know, more and more students use cell phones in school nowadays.

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Answer 1

【答案】The negative effects of using cell phones on students

As we all know, more and more students use cell phones in school nowadays. Though a cell phone is a useful device, it could have lots of negative effects on students.

Firstly, using cell phones for a long time does harm to students’ health, especially to their eyesight.

Secondly, by making calls and surf the Internet, students seldom communicate with relatives face to face. What’s more, because spending plenty of time on cell phones, they have no time to do exercise to keep fit.

Last but not least, many students play games,watch videos and talk with friends Wechat on cell phones when having classes. As a result, their grades go down rapidly.

Therefore, not only should parents and teachers prevent children from using cell phones in school but students should control themselves and stay away from playing cell phones in school.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇英語短文。目前，學生使用手機越來越普遍，但是學生使用手機的消極作用也日漸凸顯，以“The negative(負面的) effects of using cell phones on students”為題目寫一篇英語短文。內容要點：1. 長時間使用手機危害身體健康，特別是視力（eyesight）；2. 依賴于手機、網(wǎng)絡，學生與親友很少面對面交流并且沒有時間進行體育鍛煉；3. 上課玩手機游戲，聊微信（Wechat), 看視頻(video)導致學生成績下降；4. 不僅家長老師應該限制學生在學校用手機而且學生在學校也不應該玩手機。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，要重視時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。詞數(shù)要求在100詞左右。

【亮點說明】

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