Question

19．請(qǐng)先閱讀下面的電子郵件
Dear Li Hua，
I feel very happy to read your e-mail and I really appreciate your English．Congratulations to you．Your English has really improved a lot．
Oh，I have some good news to tell you．I've got a good chance to practice my Chinese as an exchange student to China．So，here I'd like to ask you for help-which school is the best one for me to attend in China．Tell me，and then I can tell my school to make contact with it．
Looking forward to your early reply and hope to meet you in China soon．
Yours friendly，
Mary
假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給瑪麗回一封電子郵件，建議她來(lái)你所在的學(xué)校．理由是：
你校每年都接納交換生；
學(xué)校條件好，各種設(shè)施好，有圖書(shū)館，電子閱覽室…；
課外活動(dòng)豐富多彩；
你校學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平好，易于交流；
特別是老師好，教法生動(dòng)有趣．
注意：可根據(jù)要求加以必要發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；詞數(shù)為120左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù)），但不得抄入答題卡．
參考詞匯：設(shè)施：facility 電子閱覽室：electro-reading-room
Hi Mary，
Nice to read your e-mail today．It's very kind of you to give me encouragement，I owe a lot to you for your help．
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in，I should recommend．
              ．
Isn't the information above enough for you to make a decision？If you come to myschool，I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers．Hope you'll like my school．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件．建議作為交換生的瑪麗來(lái)自己所在的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)并闡述理由．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．開(kāi)頭-引出下文； 2．原因；3．結(jié)尾-總結(jié)．
重要短語(yǔ)：owe sth to sb （欠某人某物），as to（關(guān)于），first-class facilities（一流的設(shè)施），be accessible to（可得到的），broaden one's views（擴(kuò)大某人的視野），get fun （獲得樂(lè)趣），varieties of（各種各樣的），provide sb with sth（給某人提供某物），have any difficulty in（有困難做某事），communicate with（與…交流），serve as （作為，充當(dāng)）．
【高分句型一】
1．we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students，①offering us places to broaden our views②while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends．
①此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)"offering us places…"作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為"we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students"．
      ②此處"while …"引導(dǎo)的從句表對(duì)比，主句為"we surely can get much fun and make many friends"．
【高分句型二】
 2．After class we have varieties of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"varieties of activities"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型三】
3．And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates．
此處是由連詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，主語(yǔ)為"the most important"，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為"is"．

解答 Hi Mary，
Nice to read your e-mail today．It's very kind of you to give me encouragement，I owe a lot to you for your help．（開(kāi)頭-引出下文）
As to which school is the best one for you to stay in，I should recommend my school．The following are the reasons．（原因）First，exchange students are welcomed in my school；（每年都接納交換生） besides，we have first-class facilities：the labs，modern libraries and electro-reading-rooms are accessible to all our students，offering us places to broaden our views while on the sports grounds and in gymnasiums we surely can get much fun and make many friends．【高分句型一】（學(xué)校條件好，各種設(shè)施好，有圖書(shū)館，電子閱覽室）After class we have varieties of activities which provide us with opportunities to improve ourselves．【高分句型二】
（課外活動(dòng)豐富多彩）And the most important is that we have the best teachers as well as the best schoolmates．【高分句型三】The teachers are kind and ready to offer help．In their unique ways of teaching，they often make their classes lively and interesting．（特別是老師好，教法生動(dòng)有趣）We students are encouraged to speak English both in and out of class，thus I do believe that you won't have any difficulty in communicating with us．（你校學(xué)生英語(yǔ)水平好，易于交流）
Isn't the information above enough for you to make a decision？If you come to my school，I think I can serve as a good link between you and other students as well as the teachers．（結(jié)尾-總結(jié)）
Hope you'll like my school．
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．