Question

【題目】假如你是李華, 你的澳大利亞筆友Sally三月底將來青島某中學教英語。她想提前了解青島的天氣、飲食習慣以及高中生英語學習的情況。請用英語給她寫一封郵件，介紹以上情況。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Sally,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sally，

I hope you are well. In your letter, you asked me something about Qingdao, which is my hometown.

Qingdao is a beautiful city, located in east of China and faces Huanghai River. Because of approaching the sea, the climate here is mild, that’s to say, it is neither too cold in winter and nor too hot in summer. Generally speaking, the people here like eating rice and seafood and drinking beer, which is known to the world.

At the senior school, we all pay attention to learning English, because we realize that English is becoming more and more important. We can listen to English news and talk to our oral English teacher, who comes from the USA, and we also have limited time to read English books and so on.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes!

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱式作文。寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點說明】本篇文章要點齊全，層次分明。文章使用了多種句型，如定語從句：Generally speaking, the people here like eating rice and seafood and drinking beer, which is known to the world.等；再如名詞性從句：I hope you are well。以及非謂語動詞的使用：Qingdao is a beautiful city, located in east of China and faces Huanghai River.句中還使用了很多短語，如：generally speaking、that is to say、pay attention to等等。