【題目】假設(shè)英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

A shop owner told me a story, that moved people in the neighborhood deep. One day, a hungry homeless dog came and the owner gave it up some food to eat. To his surprise, it comes to his shop whenever he opens a door. The owner has gradually realized that it doesn’t come for food and repays him. Every day, it sits besides the goods outside the shop and acts for a guide. When customer come near, it barks to remind the owner come out to serve them. Thus, the dog has found a home and the owner had a faithful employee.

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【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。本文主要講了一只懂得報(bào)恩的狗,一家商店的主人一次給了這只流浪狗食物,自從那次之后,這只狗就一直在商店門口待著,后來商店主人才明白原來它是來報(bào)恩的,最終這只狗跟著商店主人,找到了一個(gè)家。

第一處:考查非限制性定語從句。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句,該句的先行詞為story,在句中作主語,所以需改為which,故需將that改為which。

第二處:考查副詞。形容詞deep不能放在放在句末,這里需改為副詞,來修飾動詞move,故需將deep改為deeply。

第三處:考查動詞。這里的意思是主人給它一些食物吃,give sb sth給某人某物,所以需將up去掉

第四處:考查定冠詞。這里的door指的是前面提到的his shop的門,所以需用冠詞the,或者用代詞his,故需將an改為the或者h(yuǎn)is。

第五處:考查連詞。這里的意思是它不是來要吃的,而是來回報(bào)他。not ……but不是……而是,為固定搭配,故需將and改為but。

第六處:考查介詞。besides為副詞,意為除此之外,不能接名詞,這里需改為介詞beside,意為在……旁邊,這里的意思是它坐在這些商品旁邊,故需將besides改為beside。

第七處:考查介詞。這里指的是這只狗表現(xiàn)的像一個(gè)向?qū)。所以這里需用as,意為像,故需將for改為as。

第八處:考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)后文的serve them可知,這里的顧客不止一個(gè),需用復(fù)數(shù)形式,故需將customer改為customers。

第九處:考查動詞。remind sb to do sth提醒某人做某事,為固定搭配,所以需在owner后加to。

第十處:考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前面的has found可知,該句時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),所以需將had改為has。

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