【題目】假定你是李華,你的英國網(wǎng)友Anna在她學(xué)校舉辦的一次作文比賽中榮獲一等獎,你寫信向她表示祝賀,并在信中談及自己在英語寫作上存在的困難,希望得到她的幫助。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和具體學(xué)校信息。

Dear Anna,

I am very glad to learn that

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Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Anna,

I am very glad to learn that you have won the first prize in your school's English writing contest.And I am writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your excellent performance.

It's a real encouragement to me to see your efforts rewarded.How I admire your writing skills! I have been learning English for several years and I have little trouble in listening,speaking and writing.However,I find it hard to write a good composition.Although I've put a lot of efforts into it,I just can't find a way out.I feel stressed out.I would appreciate it if you could give me some specific advice on it.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇書信類作文,文章要點已給出,考生在寫郵件過程中應(yīng)注意以下幾點:1、書信的格式,本題中已給出,在沒給出的情況下也要記得信件的開頭和結(jié)尾, 要看清寫作的對象是誰,明確寫信人和收信人。本題中Anna為收信人,李華為寫信人。

2、書信一般要開門見山,交代寫信原因,便于讀信者了解重點。

3、注意文章要以一定的邏輯思維順序進(jìn)行敘述,既能滿足題目要求,又能把意思

表達(dá)清楚,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文流暢。題干中要求考生在信中談及自己在英語寫作上存在的困難,希望得到她的幫助,此時可以另取一段表達(dá)考生自己在寫作中遇到的困難,可例舉兩到三個困難,不宜過多,避免文章冗長。不同的困難中應(yīng)用不同的連接詞連接,例如at beginning,in the first place,at last but not least等。

【范文亮點】

第一段開門見山表達(dá)了對Anna的祝賀之情。excellent performance 精彩的表現(xiàn)這些重點詞匯的使用會讓人覺得有扎實的英語詞匯基礎(chǔ)。

How I admire your writing skills!感嘆句使文章更加活潑生動,不是在死板地闡述。

appreciate it if…如果你怎么樣我將會很高興,很好地連接上下文,行文流暢通順。

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