【題目】假設(shè)你是李華,你的朋友小敏最近迷戀網(wǎng)購,花光了自己的壓歲錢,寫信向你借錢。請你給回信,主要內(nèi)容如下:1.同意借錢,但必須要在下月底之前歸還;2.分析網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊;3. 學(xué)會勤儉生活,不亂花錢。

要求:1.詞數(shù)100左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。2.適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)使行文連貫。

提示:壓歲錢:gift money,網(wǎng)上購物:online shopping,勤儉: thrifty adj.

Dear Xiaomin,

I have received your letter and I’m sorry that you’re in trouble.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Xiaomin,

I have received your letter and I’m sorry that you’re in trouble. Yes of course I’ll lend you the money, as long as it is returned by the end of next month.

Online shopping is really popular these days, which I’m totally aware of, with its wide variety of goods, competitive prices and all the convenience. I myself buy things from Taobao or JD from time to time. What surprised me most, however, was that you should have used all your gift money shopping online. You’ve really got to think twice before you click the mouse. Do you really need the thing, or just want it? Otherwise, you’re just wasting your money and time.

We’ve been told to be thrifty since we were young and I’m sure you know how important that is.

Do take better care of yourself.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析:這是一篇提綱類短文,要求寫一封信給向自己借錢的朋友,說明三個要點:1.同意借錢,但必須要在下月底之前歸還;2.分析網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊;3. 勸他學(xué)會勤儉生活,不亂花錢。提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱,列出要點。確定文章的中心思想,然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象,進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法,增添了寫作的靈活性,同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力

【亮點說明】文章充分發(fā)揮了自己的想象力,靈活運用英語知識,采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng):in trouble,as long as只要,wide variety of 各種各樣, convenience,think twice三思,thrifty節(jié)約,并且使用了一些高級句式:which I’m totally aware of是定語從句, was that you should have used all your gift money shopping online表語從句,此句中的should表示驚訝之意,使用的恰到好處。

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