Question

14．地球上的水資源是豐富的，但可利用的淡水資源卻是有限的，因此在日常生活中我們必須節(jié)約用水．根據(jù)下面提供的信息，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，說明水的用處及我們應(yīng)如何節(jié)約用水．
1．水對(duì)我們的日常生活非常重要，沒有水一切生物都無法生存．
2．水可用來發(fā)電、灌溉農(nóng)田，工業(yè)和交通運(yùn)輸也需要大量的水．
3．節(jié)約措施：
1）洗衣、洗菜水用來沖衛(wèi)生間；
2）衣服盡量用手洗而不用洗衣機(jī)，因?yàn)橄匆聶C(jī)的用水量是手洗的三倍；
3）洗漱、洗衣服時(shí)不要讓水一直流著．
4．參考詞匯：灌溉irrigate   沖洗flush
As we all know，water is very useful and important inour daily life．Without water，all living things can't exist．
Water can be used to make electricity and irrigate farmland．Plenty of water is also needed in industry and transportation．So we must saveevery drop of water．
I think there are many measures we can take to savewater．For example，we can try our best to wash clothes by hand instead ofwashing machine，for using a washing machine means wasting 3 times as muchwater as by hand．While washingclothes，faces and brushing teeth，we mustn't have the water running all thetime．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇關(guān)于水的用處及我們應(yīng)如何節(jié)約用水的短文．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．水對(duì)我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活非常重要，沒有水一切生物都無法生存；2．水可用來發(fā)電、灌溉農(nóng)田，工業(yè)和交通運(yùn)輸也需要大量的水．3．節(jié)約措施：洗衣、洗菜水用來沖衛(wèi)生間；衣服盡量用手洗而不用洗衣機(jī)，因?yàn)橄匆聶C(jī)的用水量是手洗的三倍． 寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：As we all know  （眾所周知），be usedto do （被用來做某事），make electricity（發(fā)電），plenty of  （大量），take measuresto do （采取措施做某事），try our best to do sth （努力做某事），by hand （手工），all the time （一直），have thewater running （使水一直流淌）．

解答 As we all know，water is very useful and important inour daily life．【高分句型】Without water，all living things can't exist．（水對(duì)我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活非常重要，沒有水一切生物都無法生存）
Water can be used to make electricity and irrigate farmland．Plenty of water is also needed in industry and transportation．So we must saveevery drop of water．（水可用來發(fā)電、灌溉農(nóng)田，工業(yè)和交通運(yùn)輸也需要大量的水）
I think there are many measures we can take to savewater．For example，we can try our best to wash clothes by hand instead ofwashing machine，for using a washing machine means wasting 3 times as muchwater as by hand．【高分句型】While washing clothes，faces and brushingteeth，we mustn't have the water running all the time．（節(jié)約措施：洗衣、洗菜水用來沖衛(wèi)生間；衣服盡量用手洗而不用洗衣機(jī)，因?yàn)橄匆聶C(jī)的用水量是手洗的三倍）

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