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16．假定你是李華，請根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容提示寫一則通知，告知學生們有關下周五上午9：00史密斯教授來校做演講的情況．

地點	學校餐廳
演講人	來自河北師大（Hebei Normal University）的史密斯教授
主題	多元的美國文化（The diversity of American culture）
要求	與本班班長聯(lián)系，填寫個人信息表格，按時參加

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
2．可以適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
Attention，fellow students．
There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．     Thank you！

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一則通知，告知學生們有關下周五上午9：00史密斯教授來校做演講的情況，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：地點，演講人，主題，要求等 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：To have a better understanding of為了更好地理解；make a wonderful speech 做一個精彩的演講；finally最后
To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）
If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）

解答 Attention，fellow students．There's something important I want to tell you．To have a better understanding of American culture，our school is going to hold a lecture．（高分句型一）Professor Smith from Hebei Normal University will make a wonderful speech on"The diversity of American culture"．Remember，the speech will be held in the dinning hall next Friday at nine o'clock in the morning．If you are interested，please first contact the monitor of your class，and then fill in a form about your basic personal information．（高分句型二）And finally，please get there on time and keep the hall clean．
Thank you!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．